Writing Placement essay for Writing 3

Hello, my name is Chie. I am a university student. I like English and study English every day.
I spend about two hours going to University by train every day. My friends were very surprised. It is hard for me to get up early, but I'm not bored on a train. I like that time because I can look at the passing views from the train widow and I can listen to music with the "ipod" which my father bought for me recently.

I live in Omuta, Fukuoka. Omuta isn't a big city and there are not many places where we can play and go shopping, but I like Omuta city. I like to go for a walk in Omuta city at night. I climbed to the top of the Amagi mountain for the first time in my life. I could see the whole city and sea. The scene was very beautiful. I became liked Omuta city more. Amagi mountain is my favorite place. I will recommend the mountain if you come to my city. Do you have some favorite place? Why do you like that place?

Finally, I introduce my family.
There are four people in my family. My father, my mother , my younger sister and me. My father is funny, so he often tells jokes and makes me laugh. My mother is funny and tender. My sister is younger than me by five years. She is very wise. I like her. I love my family. Do you love your family? 　
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